The Cross-Country
Bang went the starter blocks like thunderous bolts of lightning. The race was on! All of the year 4 boys ran. I had butterflies in my stomach.
It was my second lap. I was getting tired, my legs were malfunctioning. It was almost the end. I had reached the last lap.
I was on my last lap now. I saw the finish line. The parents and younger (year 1-3) runners cheered for us. The finish line was up to five meters away. I sprinted with a little boost and finally I reached the end.
By Saahil.
I like about how you described the sound being like thunder and lightning.
ReplyDeleteI liked the Cross-country like you.
Where did you see the thunder and lightning, during the last lap or first lap???
very nice description about your feelings and I am glad that you made it to the finish line
ReplyDeletevery well written. I am glad you made it to the finish line and fell like I actually was running for the cross country
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